I loved this short story. It was so good to see Jaz and Vayl between missions, getting some alone time - just on the verge of getting together. And seeing things from both sides was a really nice touch. To know how strongly Vayl already felt about Jaz - how he'd thought about touching her. The thought that he'd put into their evening together.
It was great to know a bit more backstory as well - what draws Vayl to Jaz - how he believes it's destined.
Yes, its a shame it wasn't longer - but it was perfect as it was.